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Mr. Quiseng: A Fanfic by a Freak

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Description: This is an Allstar Weekend fanfic! Dani is a regular teenage girl whose world turns upside down when she starts crushing on her substitute, Mr. Quiseng. Thank you SO much for checking out my fanfic! it truly means a lot. Seriously, every question, positive comment, like, reply, or reblog means the world. Feel free to tell me what you think or ask a question you have about the fanfic in my ask box. I love answering all your questions :) To see all the chapters go to the Table of contents page above! xxx Thanks again -D (: LIVE ~ LAUGH ~ LLAMAS :) Readers


directi0nerh0ran Asked: "JESUS LORD. YOUR FANFIC. ITS AMAZING.DFMASDGAKJ<3333"

Answer:

Aww you think so?!? thanks so much <33

/ Sat Apr 21st, 2012 reblog

Thinking about a sequel.. Tell me what you think of the first! :)

/ Mon Apr 16th, 2012 reblog

Chapter 32

I walked into class Monday morning feeling refreshed and brand new. I dumped my stuff on my desk and turned to say hi to Mr. Quiseng.

And I yelped.

Mrs. Wilson was at her desk grading papers and resolutely ignoring me.

I fell to my knees dramatically and screamed, “NOOOOOOOOOOO!” to the Heavens. “WHY?!”

“Dani!” Lara hissed. “You’re embarrassing me! Mr. Quiseng is substituting in remedial science.” She paused and added. “You know your science grade is so bad, you could probably switch classes.”

“Yay!” I said, jumping up and beaming.

I felt like a llama in a fresh field of-

No wait.

I felt like a Dani who was about to run to the remedial science room real quick and hug Mr. Quiseng.
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Author’s Note: Yeah i know it’s cheesy. But tell me what you think of it all. Thanks for reading! <3

/ Thu Apr 12th, 2012 reblog

Last chapter. Here we go…

/ Thu Apr 12th, 2012 reblog

Chapter 31

Fresh tears came as the image of Noah and Emily pressed together against that locker, Emily’s arms around Noah’s neck, burned itself into my brain.

“Dani?”

I lifted my head off the cold now wet surface of the desk to see Mr. Quiseng standing in the front of the classroom watching me with fascination. “What happened?” he whispered.

I realized that this was the English classroom. No wonder he had checked here for me first. “Dani tell me,” he said quietly.

I shook my head. I couldn’t speak without blubbering like a baby.

“Alright,” he nodded. “Tell me when you’re ready.”

And then to my complete surprise he wrapped me up in his arms in a hug.

I buried my face in his chest trying to control my breathing. I hiccupped. He just sat there patiently, his arm around me.

He finally broke the silence by saying, “Oh I found this.” I looked up and saw him holding my other high heel. “Do you mind if I…” He looked at my foot.

“Not at all.”

He smiled and slid the shoe onto my very cold foot. “There you go, Cinderella.”

“Do we get married now?” I teased.

He studied me. “In 5 years, kay?”

I laughed and said. “Deal.”

He always made me feel better. I smiled up at him and he grinned back. I took a deep breath and told him the whole story.

When I finished he didn’t say “I told you so.” Instead he said: “He is such a fat alpaca.”

I laughed. “Take me to your pumpkin. I want to go home.”

 

Mr. Quiseng stopped the car just in front of my house. He turned to me and said, “He doesn’t deserve you, Dani. He never did and never will.”

“I know.”

He touched my cheek and said, “Hey at least we have that Star Wars convention to look forward to next Saturday.”

I laughed and hugged him. “I love you,” I said quietly.

“I love you more,” he said, squeezing me. “You’re like my little sister and NO ONE hurts my little sister.”

I knew it was time for me to go and with a final farewell, I left the car.

When I got upstairs I felt…. Good.

Mr. Quiseng loved me.

And NO ONE could take that away from me.

Not Emily.

Not Noah.

And certainly not all the people who had ever made me feel alone.

Tears escaped my eyes.

Tears of happiness.

Mr. Quiseng loved me.

And no one could take that away from me.

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Author’s Note: Oh hey only one chapter left.. tell me what you think of the fanfic overall.

/ Sun Apr 8th, 2012 reblog

Chapter 30

A few seconds later Andrew was dragging me through the hallways of the school when his cell phone rang. He grimaced at the screen. “My mom. Gotta take this. But they’re around that corner,” He said pointing.

I nodded and began to turn but Andrew grabbed my shoulders and said, “I’m sorry, Dani, I’m so sorry,” Then he pulled me in for a long hug.

A warm sensation crept from where his arms were holding me and spread through me quickly. I soon forgot all about Noah. After a moment, though, Andrew released me and left without a word.

I stared after him, slightly confused.

Then I remembered why I was there.

I began to run. Where were the fighting noises? The only sound in the deserted hallway was my high heels on the tiled floor.

Click

Clack

Click

Clack

Click

Cla-

I froze midstep.

Noah was definitely not fighting anyone.

The hallway was empty except for two people. It took me a second to comprehend what I was seeing. And even longer to accept it. Noah was pressing Emily into a locker and kissing her. And I mean REALLY kissing her. My brain stopped working.

And my heart broke.

The tears were coming fast and I didn’t want to give that cheater the satisfaction of seeing me cry.

I ran into the nearest classroom not even caring when one of my heels slipped off.

I collapsed into a desk and the tears shook me.

I had REALLY like him. I had been there for him and he had cheated on me with the girl who had made my life a living hell since the fifth grade. I thought he was different. but he was like everybody else. He was just like every single boy in the world.

And the worst part?

He could’ve just told me that he wanted to break up, that he wanted action and Emily instead of making out with her while we were together.

But he hadn’t.

He had chosen to cheat on me.

This didn’t surprise me.

After all I wasn’t special.

I wiped my face and found a wet mascara streak on my hand. Great. I bother to put on makeup and I end up looking like a llama after a run up Machu Pichu.

I expected this all to be one big nightmare but it wasn’t. it was my life. I wasn’t gonna wake up and everything would be ok. Nothing would be ok. My boyfriend had cheated on me.

So alright I had been had feelings for my teacher at the same time that I had been dating him but at least I had been trying to get over Mr. Quiseng. Noah had probably been with Emily that whole time :(

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Author’s Note: Tell me what you think of this! Only two more chapters!

2 Notes / Thu Apr 5th, 2012 reblog

Hey guys. Thank you so much for all the support you’ve given me while i’ve written this fanfic <3 it means so much.

Mr. Quiseng is going to be ending soon. I’m posting the last chapter this week! So make sure to check back for that! Thanks guys :)

/ Thu Apr 5th, 2012 reblog

Chapter 29

I bit down on my lip and looked at my reflection critically.

I was wearing a light purple dress that stopped just above my knees. It had a halter-like top, and the skirt was made of silky waves. I loved it. My mom had bought it for me a while ago but I had just shoved it in the back of my closet at the time.

But even though my mom had insisted that I looked beautiful, I didn’t feel it. I wanted to put on my hoodie with the deep pockets to have somewhere to put my hands. I wanted to wear my Converse. I wanted to pull on my Elmo hat to hide my face.

I wanted a Mr. Quiseng hug.

I took a deep breath and left my room to face my doom.

“You look beautiful,” Noah said.

We had decided to meet at the dance which was in the now fabulously decorated gym. But even though I could see some male eyes on me and Noah was totally checking me out I did Not feel beautiful.

I felt like I had a costume on. I didn’t feel like Dani. I felt like a fake.

I was planning to run out of the crowded gym when Mr. Quiseng showed up..

Beautiful.

His hair was brushed, his blue-green eyes were twinkling and he was in a black tux looking so so so…

I was staring at him unable to tear my eyes away.

A hand pressed itself into the small of my back. “Do you want to go for a walk?” Mr. Quiseng asked.

He was so close and smelled so amazing… without any hesitation I said, “Yes.”

Even though the school building was old and falling apart, the exterior was beautiful. There were rosebushes and big proud trees standing tall. And in the spring dozens upon dozens of flowers would blossom.

Mr. Quiseng led me through the gardens to a little fountain with cute marble baby cherubs on the top. Mr. Quiseng sat down on a stone bench next to it and I sat down next to him. “You must be cold,” he said, wriggling out of his tux jacket and draping it over my shoulders.

“There are gonna be some changes around here,” He began.

“What kind of changes?”

“Well on Monday I’m no longer going to-”

“DANI!”

I turned to see an out of breath Andrew in a cute tux. “Noah- he’s- you -come- with- me.”

“WHAT?!” I cried out, confused.

But he was already running.

One thing I understood. Noah was in trouble.

I shook off Mr. Quiseng’s jacket and ran.

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Author’s Note: Only 3 chapters left! Tell me what you think.

2 Notes / Mon Apr 2nd, 2012 reblog

Mr. Quiseng is coming to an end. Only a few chapters left..

Tell me what you think of it!

/ Mon Apr 2nd, 2012 reblog
Anonymous Asked: "ahh you are driving me crazy i love it so much but could you update it more soon! it will be amazing if you do that :)"

Answer:

Aww that’s sweet :)

and yeah now that i’m on spring break i’ll be writing more :)

/ Sat Mar 31st, 2012 reblog